Nina's poetry
The Birth of Venus
The Birth of Venus* Sexless for years yet living with a lover, I identify with Venus, the enigma born fully formed. Wistful old souls, our smiles beguile, though her beauty far eclipses mine. Decked in modest clothes, rugged boots, heavy pack, I walk in meditation in a bamboo grove as Venus pudica poses in contrapposto, precarious balanced atop a taupe and gold scallop. Venus’ lover Thallo stands serene in rose-speckled ivory frock, her lithe arms open crimson cape whose petals bleed as she covers Venus’nudity seconds too late. In his brawny arms, Zephyr clutches the invisible blowup doll. Legs crisscross tangle akimbo at impossible angles, fly with wings lacquered black, poisonous. He blew in to the dining table— Spry, elevates a salt and pepper eyebrow, dilates pupils, puffs cheeks, like playing tuba, becomes a wry devil, ensorcels us. A world away my lover sails alone while the devil across the table faces me. He’s all too cognizant of the magnetism of his clever words and how they deceive. I step off the shelter of the shell into deep dark waters, too cold to swim. My protection plan falls fallow as he plots his seduction. *after the popular painting, The Birth of Venus by Botticelli c. 1485



Fantastic work five stars 🌟
Nina, this surprised me. The context you added after reading your draft to us just puts the whole piece in a different place, different direction. I really love your work but the ending of this piece is very special. Thanks for this.